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Harold Ember's avatar

Good story, engaging and interesting. But I am so confused.

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A.M. Harrison's avatar

It might be more confusing than necessary, but it is meant to be inexplicable. The sense that you can do anything you want and even take the right actions, yet something beyond comprehension can still happen.

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Harold Ember's avatar

Alright, thanks.

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Lisa Wagner's avatar

Really good! Write more of the story!!

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